Comment Archives: stories: Arts + Scene: Poetry

Re: “Raggedy Rainbow

Loved this one. A lot of meaning packed into the brevity. Like its rhythm and pace, too.'

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Posted by jakable on 05/23/2019 at 12:20 PM

Re: “After They Lifted the Statue Up,

Great poem. Love that ending.

Posted by jakable on 03/22/2019 at 11:10 AM

Re: “A Sad Surprise

Nice Jenny. Rest in peace Mary.

Posted by Gloria Picchetti on 03/14/2019 at 12:16 PM

Re: “A Sad Surprise

Terrific poem full of genuine emotion.

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Posted by jakable on 03/14/2019 at 10:34 AM

Re: “Shared Space

Nicely done. Love the ending.

Posted by jakable on 02/14/2019 at 11:12 AM

Re: “Maybe the Sun Will Come Out Today

Beautiful.

Posted by Cate Be on 01/24/2019 at 7:37 AM

Re: “Broken

Outstanding. You have captured the situation.

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Posted by jakable on 01/10/2019 at 9:06 AM

Re: “The Death of the Shelter Dog

Amazing Poem! Moving and true.

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Posted by Rene Diedrich on 08/31/2018 at 8:58 AM

Re: “Even Banana Slugs Take their Chances

This is a great poem!

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Posted by Mary I Bockover on 04/20/2018 at 12:15 AM

Re: “Walking Past

Really nice poem with a potent message.

Posted by jakable on 11/09/2017 at 9:43 AM

Re: “The swallows are gathering at Klamath Glen

I love it!

Posted by Gloria Picchetti on 10/26/2017 at 10:26 AM

Re: “Lunch for One

Great, funny . . .

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Posted by brucebalboni on 02/23/2017 at 6:57 AM

Re: “light

Great poem!

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Posted by brucebalboni on 01/07/2017 at 7:04 PM

Re: “We give thanks for Donald Trump

I love this poem!

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Posted by Gloria Picchetti on 12/22/2016 at 1:57 PM

Re: “Last Phase

Spoke to me of a long ago summer camping trip with a long dead friend. Thanks.

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Posted by jakable on 08/05/2016 at 4:35 PM

Re: “Introvert

Love it!

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Posted by Nick Campise on 04/22/2016 at 12:21 PM

Re: “The Writers' House

Nice. I like.

Do you believe the Golden Age is already here?

I do. So now the job of waking everybody up to this fact!

:)

Posted by alchenault on 11/11/2015 at 9:28 PM

Re: “Paying It Forward / Fall Day

Lauri,
I love your Poem! You're able to see the Life Cycle as well, so that means we are Kindred Spirits. Now, is the time, " We Kindred Spirits are to gather together as we may. I see on the near Horizon the Dawn of a New Day. Here is a short piece I wrote some time ago and it seems to accompany your piece, "Paying It Forward/Fall Day," quite well. What do you think?

"Tree Talk"


The rush of wind oer’ pine bough

The soft hiss, and now the low distant muffled roar

Echoed by the gentle howl of wind-swept Oak branch

Tree talk

Makes your spirit soar

Albert Chenault Jr
alcofnva@gmail.com

Posted by alchenault on 11/05/2015 at 2:08 PM

Re: “What Did We See?

Aline,
As a former short term student there in the Bay area, at CR to be exact, your poetic work activated such intense memories within me; of even the scent of the early morning air by the Bay. A uniquely cool, moist, lively smell of Earth and Sea come together. A fond pleasant memory for me at least. Thank you so much for this. :)

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Posted by alchenault on 08/21/2015 at 11:16 AM

Re: “Riverbank Music

I like the idea that you have to be "in...tune" to enjoy it. I like that a lot!

Posted by Nick Campise on 08/08/2015 at 7:17 PM

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